May I make a suggestion? This is just one of my pet peeves, but spelling and grammatical errors on a website suggest to me a lack of professionalism and caring on the part of the webhost. I'm probably going to get slammed for this (I usually am) or have errors on my own website pointed out (which I welcome since I know my inherited database is frought with errors and I can't find them all myself)
Here's a portion of your intro:
In 1965 the New York state government bought and made this area into a very successful campgrounds. Camp Powderly remained one of the most successful camp grounds until June of 2000 when we were forced to close because unusual occurrences of campers were becoming missing and weird and strange things happening. In October 2000 a major FBI investigation was underway until three FBI agents bodies where found dead. The case was closed in September of 2001 and the FBI declared there was no sign of foul play. The camp could re-open in October.
Here's my suggested version:
In 1965 the New York state government bought and made this area into a very successful campground. Camp Powderly remained one of the most successful campgrounds until June of 2000 when we were forced to close because of unusual occurrences of campers becoming missing and weird and strange things happening. In October 2000 a major FBI investigation was underway until three FBI agents bodies were found dead. The case was closed in September of 2001 and the FBI declared there was no sign of foul play. The camp could re-open in October.
Here's a portion of your intro:
In 1965 the New York state government bought and made this area into a very successful campgrounds. Camp Powderly remained one of the most successful camp grounds until June of 2000 when we were forced to close because unusual occurrences of campers were becoming missing and weird and strange things happening. In October 2000 a major FBI investigation was underway until three FBI agents bodies where found dead. The case was closed in September of 2001 and the FBI declared there was no sign of foul play. The camp could re-open in October.
Here's my suggested version:
In 1965 the New York state government bought and made this area into a very successful campground. Camp Powderly remained one of the most successful campgrounds until June of 2000 when we were forced to close because of unusual occurrences of campers becoming missing and weird and strange things happening. In October 2000 a major FBI investigation was underway until three FBI agents bodies were found dead. The case was closed in September of 2001 and the FBI declared there was no sign of foul play. The camp could re-open in October.
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